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Slip into Unconsciousness

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Literature Text

I'm standing on the edge
of a bottomless Abyss
called Unconsciousness

3 steps to the cliff...
The vast reaches of the dark
an inexorable magnetism
calls to me.

Inches left...
Hypnotic pinpricks of light
Draw me in.
I Slip
Quietly Falling
Asleep.
Im so tired...
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Enigma26's avatar
oooh nifty. I can totally relate, I almost fell asleep driving home from work earlier. And yet here I sit surfing the net instead of going to bed like a reasonable person.....lol.....

One thing, in the 3rd line of the 3rd stanza, I think it should be "draw" instead of "draws," no?

But nicely done, I like it. :D